Again, not good enough, but definitely an insight into my soul.
Magic
but this is progress. When I was five, Rapunzel
got a haircut, became
seller of purple, sponsor of apostles. Every
frog and owl was tossed away. Demons.
was Master of the Universe.
Only Aslan had the kind of power
we could celebrate, wild as Jesus, and each summer
we read his endorsed enchantment together
in my parents’ king-sized bed.
from my brother’s lips, from mine,
she chides, expounds the magic of change,
warns us not to be so sure of anything
in our twenties. She remembers when pants and
bacon came from the Devil, when the TV
hid shame-faced in the closet, when exorcism
was en vogue. She fears we might be under the spell
that made her sister a troll, hoarding the jewels of
revelation with Mine! Mine! Mine!
behind our backs. We’ve turned that troll
into a jolly Mother Goose, and she’ll be a princess
yet, well-versed like us in the magic of change,
of granite turned to soft, pink flesh.
5 comments:
This poem may not ever be published, but it made me have a tear or two once again. I love your way with words and your imagery. Thanks for loving me through all the silly-yet-seeking-to-do-right stages of my life. "Love" - that's the "magic-est" wand of all - all three of you give me loads of it. I love you. Mom
wow. that was really good. Poets amaze me.
I mean anyone can do a simple aabba rhyme scheme but it takes real talent to be able to say something meaningful and still be creative (like the thing where a sentence is completed on the next line....I don't know what you call that but it's so cool).
Enjoyed reading your blog! This poem sounds like it could have been written by one of my kids who are all grown up now!
Thanks Mom, Josh, and Miss Brenda! Sorry it took me so long to respond.
Interesting poem. I always liked He-Man. Bobby called him Pee-Man when he was little.
Oh, your mom gave me your Blog address! I also watched your video of London.
You can check out my Blog, too and see pictures of Michael and Paul.
Love you,
Debbie
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